Cute. You have good ideas, and wrote some nice scenes. It is a little choppy within some of the scenes and there are some pesky grammar errors and typos.

OH! Spike's so sweet. Heartbreaker,that one. Nice ficlet. I'll try to read the rest of them later. I quite enjoyed the dialogue from both characters.

I like your little ficlet series. Very nice. However, there are several typos in the last chapter. "fized," "Danw," "fruniture," "curiod," "mondster." Otherwise, good show...

Oh, no fair! Spike marks her and she is researching immortality (why not just build her own Philosopher's Stone?) and that's it? The boys torturing Spike for information was nice, as was the girls faking the kitchen problem. Bit surprised that Spike didn't invite her himself...and that he waited two weeks between visits. Was there an apocalypse or something?

Few typos (firends? fized?) but otherwise content and flow were great. Would have loved flashbacks to their Paris date but the hints to the girls works as well.

Actually enjoyed the willow/dawn pairing. was well written and I could see how it could come about. Nice work

Nice chapter-how did they get London to Paris in a car? One of the ferry trips? Thanks for the explanation-it still seems squicky but that's more of a personal thing. You did handle the explanation well.

While I can see her being intimidated by how gorgeous he is, so are many of her male friends. I would hope she gets over that quickly. Especially if he dotes on her the way he has his previous women.

Loved the relationship with Hermione and Dawn-would have liked for them to spend more than "five minutes" the day before. How would Hermione get Dawn's number in so short of time?

Hermione needing help was a definite throwback to Hogwarts balls. Dawn did a lovely job but I wouldn't take the "Hermione is ugly" device too far. I can see her being somewhat insecure (especially in light of some of the women she is surrounded by) but even she can see she isn't the ugliest woman in a room.

Ah, first date nerves. I remember those. Of course, she and Spike are like two peas in a pod-should be a great relationship. Liked the Charlie/Buffy swap as well, their backgrounds and personal likes match to every degree but her liking to shop and him being in the middle of nowhere. Otherwise, great potential. Only one you did that I didn't like was Willow/Dawn. It just seemed forced. And a bit like incest. If we can get a bit more explanation (somewhat possible in 2 more ficlets, but maybe you didn't intend to include that far) it could possibly work if handled delicately; but right now it's kinda like dating your big sister/pseudo mom. Just a bit squicky.

Excellent beginning. Just enough to whet the appetite while still leaving questions. Looking forward to the other two ficlets.