Review of chapter "Crime Scene" from
purrfusReview:
Congratulations on your 2007 COA nomination.
Cordy with Jim and Blair is a interesting mix with lots of potential - in so many ways.
Blair's internal musings, and both Jim and Blair' reactions to the crime scene are really well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks Purrfus.
Regards, Tals
Review By [
purrfus] • Date [13 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crime Scene" from
MaeveTyrNamidReview:
I love it. I'm interested in how Jim and Blair react to Cordelia. I hope you plan to continue it soon. Great work.
Comments from author:
Thanks MaeveTyrNamid. I hope my muse will get into this story again. And I do have the whole thing plotted out.
Tals
Review By [
MaeveTyrNamid] • Date [1 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Crime Scene" from
LadyFoxFireReview:
Well it's been almost 2 yrs since you last updated this fic so is it safe to assume that it's a dead fic?
Comments from author:
I really wish I could tell you otherwise, but I've been totally blocked for this, as well as all my other writing ideas for ages now; I have loads of stories sitting on my computer with an beginning and a middle... and no end in sight. I won't update Cascade Visions before I have at least a few chapters of it in the computer, so as to not end up like this again. I am truly sorry, but I just can't seem to actually write anything at the moment.
Tals
Review By [
LadyFoxFire] • Date [24 Jan 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crime Scene" from
TOMReview:
Pretty good start.Cordy on a road trip,very original plot...and I love The Sentinel's characters.
After a year of rest,your muse should be in a good mood.
Come on!Finish this!
Comments from author:
Hey TOM, I know it's been a while *cough* *cough* since I've updated much of anything, but I do have the outline for the story ready, and I will finish it. At the moment I'm working on a one-shot, just to get back in the groove again. *crosses fingers and bribes muse with chocolate*.
Thanks for your lovely review, Tals
Review By [
TOM] • Date [25 Mar 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crime Scene" from
handReview:
So I just re-read this story and remembered how much I liked it. Is there any hope of you writing any more?
Comments from author:
Actually, I've just started getting out of my massive writer's block, and I'm currently editing the first three chapters (don't worry, just adding some detail) and then I'm off to start writing new ones. But in all fairness it might be a month or two *cringe* I know, I know... But of course my writer's block had to disappear in the middle of finishing off a project.
Thanks for the review, Hands. Hope you're not to put off with me and my non-posting for the last... well, it's been a while.
Tals
Review By [
hand] • Date [9 Nov 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crime Scene" from
RachelKReview:
Developing slowly, but very interesting. This could have been the first chapter of the story, and it would have made sense.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, Rachel. I see your point, and I even agree, but I needed to introduce the sentinel concept and Cordy's background just a bit before getting into the storyline... Thus the 'slower' chapters at the beginning.
Tals
Review By [
RachelK] • Date [15 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crime Scene" from
handReview:
This story is amazing. I love Cordy crossovers anyway it'll be great to see her interact with the boys in Cascade. I'm very excited to see what Blair and Jim think of her. I hope you update soon.
Comments from author:
Glad you like it, Hand. I think my muse is back on work for good, so updates should be speedier. *crosses fingers* Thanks for reviewing.
Tals
Review By [
hand] • Date [15 Feb 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Crime Scene" from
DavelisterReview:
Hi Tals!
I hope your virus problem has been sorted.
Glad to see that your muse has decided to co-operate.
you got Cordy's reaction to the vision down pretty well, cursing the PTB's and all.
never seen Sentinel so can't comment on that side of it.
keep up the good work!
Dave Lister
Comments from author:
Hey Dave!! There are officially no virusses on the PC. Thanks! *big grin* Glad you find Cordy in character. Haven't written that much with her before, so it's nice to know it isn't entirely off base.
Hopefully I'll manage to explain the Sentinel verse well enough for you to follow (that's the plan anyway) especially since Cordy doesn't know it either. If you need more info on that side of things (e.g. it doesn't make any sense) let me know, and I'll work in some more details.
Thanks for your review, Tals
Review By [
Davelister] • Date [15 Feb 05] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Crime Scene" from
KatcinLeeReview:
Oh yeah... I love the Sentinel -- one of my very first fandoms, especially into slash territory . But it's okay if that's not your thing, smarm is just as good. I really like how this is all shaping up. The pacing is nice, though I'm excited for Cordy and the guys to meet. I kinda hope you're not going to go the romance route, actually. It's so rare that you see a good friendship fic.
Comments from author:
Thanks Katcinlee! I'm happy you are enjoying this story. I don't write slash, so sorry 'bout that. On the other hand I don't really write romance either. When I try everything just goes mushy, and not in a good way. So unless I quite surprise myself, this will be friendship.
Tals
Review By [
KatcinLee] • Date [14 Feb 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Crime Scene" from
CilouReview:
Great story, I love it! I can't wait to read more, update soon...
^_~
Comments from author:
Thanks Cilou. I'm so pleased you liked it. Hopefully it won't be another *cringe* month before the next update. (I thought I would be very productive during my vacation, instead it turned out that my muse went on a vacation of her own. Now that I'm back in school, she has returned too.) Yeah!!!
Tals
Review By [
Cilou] • Date [14 Feb 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dissertations" from
RachelKReview:
Thanks for continuing the story, especially thanks for being very clear with the AU elements in the story, driven by character.
Comments from author:
Hi Rachel, don't worry, I won't quit a story once I've started posting it. And I have a skeleton plot for the whole thing. (pretty vague, but enough to give me a direction.) So it'll definitely be continued.
Glad you like the character-driven elements, that's what I like writing most. *g*
Thanks for the review.
Tals
Review By [
RachelK] • Date [13 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dissertations" from
handReview:
I had forgotten about this story I'm glad to see an update. I can't wait to see Cordy and Jim interact. Please keep it up.
Comments from author:
Hi Hand, sorry for the long absence of updates, RL happens to the best of us. LOL! Thanks for the review.
Tals
Review By [
hand] • Date [13 Jan 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dreams" from
cwolfReview:
I like it
Comments from author:
Thanks cwolf!
Tals
Review By [
cwolf] • Date [6 Dec 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dreams" from
handReview:
I really like this story and I hope you continue. I don't think that I've ever seen a Cordelia based Sentinal cross. Looks like it'll be good.
Comments from author:
Don't worry Hand. I promise I'll finish anything I start. Just that this might get off to a rocky start... (In my last story I could almost keep it to an update a week. I'm not going to be able to do that, at least not in the beginning.)
I haven't seen a Cordy/sentinel cross either, but I hope it'll work. Glad you like it so far.
Tals
Review By [
hand] • Date [6 Dec 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dreams" from
DavelisterReview:
Hi Tals,
A new story!!!! OMG! this is great news.
like the pic, when will the cross come into it?
So both doyle and Angel are dead? bad luck for doyle at least. :'(
hope RL doesn't interfere too much with your writing.
of course Xmas is kind of unavoidable.
Keep it up!
Dave.
p.s. hmm
Comments from author:
Hi Dave!!! See? New story, just like I promised. The cross will come into it fairly quickly (not like in DS,M, don't worry...) I think the next chapter will be sentinel, and chapter three should be a cross... (if my muse agrees... she has the basic plot down, but she's still debating on the execution of it.)
Why is it bad luck for doyle? He died anyway... It's Angel that got the bad part of the deal... But of course this time around Doyle died without being a hero. (guess that's pretty bad luck)
Glad you liked the pic. RL includes not only christmas but also exams, and a trip to visit my family. It'll probably interfere a bit. sigh. Well that's life. I'll do my best to keep the updates regular, but don't say I didn't warn you.
Tals.....hmm
Review By [
Davelister] • Date [6 Dec 04] • Rating [6 out of 10]