Review of chapter "2" from
LinReview:
This story sounds like it could be pretty neat...you should post it on the challenge board so people can find it easier and hopefully will finish it :D
Review By [
Lin] • Date [25 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cousins" from
superbrutalReview:
You know that could work really well, those two do look alike.
Review By [
superbrutal] • Date [7 Dec 04] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cousins" from
CaliadragonReview:
This was so cool! I really hope that you will be writing more soon.
Thanks
calia
Review By [
Caliadragon] • Date [7 Dec 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cousins" from
LNRReview:
WHOO HOO! YES!!!!! This is an AWSOME story line. Keep going!!!
Review By [
LNR] • Date [7 Dec 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cousins" from
ravenReview:
You might want to note when this story occurs within the canon's. Also, age-reduction? If it's just after Voldie is first killed, Harry is still a little baby (about 1 yr old or 4 mos old depending on which side of the year you prefer it to occur on) so he doesn't need one. If Xander is old enough to take care of Harry, then he doesn't either. Whose sister? Another Evans girl? Hm...does explain Xander's parents a bit...
Comments from author:
This is supposed to be around Harry's sixth year, and I deliberately left it kinda vague on what happened with the potion and how old Xander is in case someone wanted to finish writing the story, so they could decide the details. This is also supposed to be following Xander's thoughts, and most people don't think in great detail.
Maybe I should have been more clear. For the sake of this story, Lily had another sister(Xander's mom) that nobody knew about; how they found out now... I didn't feel like thinking of a way. :)
Also, Harry's mind is supposed to have been regressed to the age his body is(the age is up to whoever decides to take on this story, if anyone. He's somewhere between two and seven). Hope that clears everything up(and doesn't confuse you more).
Review By [
raven] • Date [7 Dec 04] • Not Rated