Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from
BunneyReview:
WHAT! Why is it over....there hasn't been an update in a year! boo hoo! PLease add more for me! pretty please!
later and love
Bunney
Comments from author:
I'm not to happy with the direction this one has taken. So I'm taking a step back form this one.
Review By [
Bunney] • Date [21 Jun 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from
DragonelfReview:
I hope you will be inspired to continue this story soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Sorry for the late reply. I thinking of rewritting this when I have more time.
Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [30 Apr 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from
flyawayblueReview:
Lovely story, i hope your going to update one day. Love they way you write Willow and Sev, even the way you write the changing Draco. Can't wait to see how this develops.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I think I may rewrite this though. But I definitely plan to continue this.
Review By [
flyawayblue] • Date [1 Mar 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from
LinReview:
Wow, 13 chapters already, i was disappointed when i reached the end.
I like the way you write willow, i was impressed when you wrote her having difficulty initially as so many writers tend to make her good at everything from the start.
can't wait to see how the other Gryffindors are going to act when Snape isn't intentionally cruel to her like he is the rest of the house..or how willow reacts when he is....teehee..it'll be fun to watch the interaction which ever direction you take it.
I hope she pairs up with Neville in potions..that poor boy needs someone to help keep Snape off his back. That is who she sat down next to, right?
How are things in sunny hell? Is the Scooby gang going to make an occasional appearance or are you gonna just make it focused on Hogwarts? They should owl at least. :D
Review By [
Lin] • Date [22 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from
mousemtReview:
Woo-hoo! I love updates! Nice movement for this chapter. It'll be fun to see the Gryffindors' reactions when Snape tries to maintain a relationship. I have an idea of Willow's reaction to them, can't wait to see how you do it, though. I like how you've got Draco running for the hills and Snape digging in to fight for her well-being and the Gryffindor males drooling. It'll make for some entertaining interaction later.
Review By [
mousemt] • Date [21 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from
morganniaReview:
love this story, it has so much potentional. Willow/Draco & Willow/Harry are my two of my favorite pairings & this is 2 for the price of 1,. now that the term has started, i have high hopes for a jelous Draco until he gets over himself as Willow is welcomed by the griffyndors & HArry in particular. can't wait for the next chapter.
Review By [
morgannia] • Date [21 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from
summerfireflyReview:
You are bloody brilhiant!!!!! I want more!!!!! Pleas
Review By [
summerfirefly] • Date [17 Mar 06] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from
ChelseaReview:
I really like this fic. I can't wait to read more! Great job so far.
Review By [
Chelsea] • Date [4 Feb 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from
EricaReview:
Thanks for the update to one of my favorite stories. This chapter was very good, I could almost feel her uncomfortableness (is that a word?) But any-who, great job and I look forward to more updates soon..hint..hint.
Review By [
Erica] • Date [29 Jan 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from
FicChickReview:
Please continue
Comments from author:
You ask and here it is. Enjoy
Review By [
FicChick] • Date [29 Jan 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from
mousemtReview:
Oooohh! I like how you're building the story here. Watching Draco in earlier chapters, you can see something like this was coming. Be fun to watch him turn purple when Willow moves on... Can't wait to read it.
Comments from author:
Yep there was no mystery there. It was pretty obvious. But the the fun really starts when Draco realizes what a huge mistake he made.
Review By [
mousemt] • Date [2 Jun 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from
JustmineSMReview:
Wow - and then what happened?????????????
Comments from author:
The End....Just kidding. More to come promise.
Review By [
JustmineSM] • Date [2 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
BunneyReview:
okay where is more of this hunny? write faster, i just get into all your fics and poof i'm waiting for more :) so hurry hurry hurry
later and love
bunney
Comments from author:
Here's more for your enjoyment. ~angelaask
Review By [
Bunney] • Date [19 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
booReview:
Please continue!
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [
boo] • Date [19 Apr 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from
EllandrahSylverReview:
Hi! *waves*
I'm enjoying this story. Might wanna let up on the superlatives, though. Your description of Ollivander made me laugh, because this bit - "asked the small tiny little man" made him sound like he was about two inches tall. Just a bit of friendly advice.
Comments from author:
Yeah the last chapter was a bit too much but I try to keep it down in the future. Thanks for the feedback. ~angelaask
Review By [
EllandrahSylver] • Date [4 Feb 05] • Rating [8 out of 10]