Like it so far, Would love to see where it goes.
up-date soon

Great start, though you were right about your spelling, it would read so much smoother if you had someone help you fix it. So, you gonna tell us what happens next?

not a bad start.

I could of sworn I hit spell checked.

Spell checker isn't enough on its own, because it will tell you the wrong word is OK if you've spelled it correctly. And you need to pay attention to grammar too.

For example:

falling irritably - should be irritatingly
The world could of imploded - could have imploded
Who cared, who cared. - it's a question, should have been followed by a question mark.
She realized distractedly that this was the third time she's worn this dress. - Change of tense from past to present; should be "She'd worn.
Three slayers had accompanied them to an abandoned warhorse - should be warehouse
Buffy's expression was on of pure annoyance - one of pure annoyance
something felt very off about her room. - it isn't Dawn's room, so it should be the room
there was the foreboding sound - I'm pretty sure you can't use foreboding in this sense
Dawn's hand instantly when to her dagger sheath. - instantly went

I really don't have the patience to go through the rest, it's painful to read. PLEASE read throough your work at least once before posting it.

Damn.

But I'm seriously glad that somebody punched Spike for not telling them he was back... That always struck me as a very asshole-ish--not to mention very Angel-ish--thing to do. Definitely deserves a punching.

Good first chapter... Can't wait for more.

aww- sad. Looking forward to next chapter.
Merry Christmas
Kiara
xxx

interesting beginning... can't wait to read more...
update soon!
^_~