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springReview:
Wow I love this fic so far and I am very very eager to read more. (feeding the plot bunnies and the muse their favorite foods) More soon please.
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spring] • Date [14 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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lorwenReview:
awesome story!!!
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lorwen] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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ElleriaReview:
Love this!
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Elleria] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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LadyFoxFireReview:
You really do have to pity General Hammond
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LadyFoxFire] • Date [9 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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DragonelfReview:
Yay, new chapter.
Poor General Hammond.
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot stew::
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Dragonelf] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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dogbertcarrollReview:
The President probably loves the reports he gets from SG1. They have to be the most amusing thing he gets to read each week.
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dogbertcarroll] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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DreamweaverReview:
Well, given timeline events, even though he can't know the exact specifics of the situation, I think the prez should already have a fair good idea what's in and what's going on in Sunnydale and should be able to figure out that the two "worlds" of the SGC and the nightlife have finally crossed paths at least.
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Dreamweaver] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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erikthevikingReview:
LOL, great chapter, thanks.
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eriktheviking] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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AlthalusReview:
Great to see an update on this.
Great line about the cheerleader with a crossbow ;-)
I wonder why they're so fixated on Xander being a Goa'uld. They do know about the Tok'ra at this point. Don't they? I'm not sure about the time setting for SG1
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Your answer does clear things up. I'm looking forward to the next chapter
Comments from author:
ah ha... in fact, they don't know the Tok'ra, they also don't know about a LOT as this is set early to mid season one... hopefully this answers some of your questions.
-Tjin
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Althalus] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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djhardimReview:
Great.
Omake - Epilogue -
Xander patented some Tokra technology and became quite wealthy. After school he attended a truck driving school and got his commercial license. He bought his own rig and went out on the road with his partner, the Snake. On the way he fulfilled his dream of visiting all fifty states. His travels were later made into a television series - "Xander and the Snake".
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djhardim] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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missinglinkReview:
"I’m going to have to call you back sir, I think we’re being threatened by a cheerleader with a crossbow"
Best O'Neill line ever!!!
Please keep em coming as chapters like this are great to break up the explainy ones.
Can't wait for what's next. Usually I can get a read on how a writer is intending to take a story or at least have my own idea. This is one of the few that so departs from expectation that it is as much fun as interesting to read.
Hope the plot bunnies stay restless. Just not turn into zombies.
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missinglink] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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LFWReview:
Someone at the Pentagon has to have a list of some of the best after-action reports; and Jack sure has made that list with this report.
Thanks for more of this
So, is Drusilla dust now?
And as nice as it is to torture Spike that way, how long can a vamp survive like that? Because I would hate to think that Spike will be back
Looking forward to more
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LFW] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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stasaReview:
That was hilarious, please don't keep us waiting for too log to see more....
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stasa] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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InquisitorReview:
good to see that there's an update...so Angelus is the only one left and will probably be dust soon if Xander or Kendra finds him...even if Kendra dies this time, Xander has the sarcophagus to bring her back to life&activate Faith...the Sunnyhell PD wouldn't be in any position to blame the scoobies since SG1 can probably be on their side...what did O'Neill's nephew Sam dress up for Halloween...?
something that i'm looking forward to is Xander getting more hardware...remember that Yerin is supposed to be Ra's weapon master...which means he has the technical knowledge to build a lot of neat toys like a lightsaber&personal shield for Xander...Yerin also mentioned the planetary defense grid that was on Earth&this reminds me of the Setim planetary defense grid on the stargate novels...Yerin probably has a backup plan when he was imprisoned by Ra...like Osiris, he had a goa'uld ship hidden somewhere....Yerin would probably have a secret ship somewhere that has the facilities to develop weapons and be able escape from Ra...he could probably bribe the SGC to leave Xander&his friends alone if he gave them that or tech on how to build Hatak level shields...
anyway destiny is royally messed up now that Drusilla is dead, Spike will be dust soon&maybe Angelus too...what i'd like to see is SG1 investigating the incompetence&conspiracy of the Sunnyhell's police dept and municipal officials like the mayor...
Comments from author:
a great review, but next time PLEASE Post this in Author Only format so you don't go pointing out so many of my plot bunnies to everybody...
Just as a Note Sam was not in Sunnydale during Halloween (Mac and Sam only recently moved into the area.)
anyways, thanks for the great Review and hopefully i can get around to writing more soon.
-Tjin
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Inquisitor] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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norgcoReview:
Well yes, so many of SG-1's mission reports would be like that.
Imagine if the project ever goes public and someone has to try to explain why a civilian archaeologist managed to be Killed In Action half a dozen times, twice 'ascending to a higher plane of existence'.
Glad to see an update. Love it.
Review By [
norgco] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]