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sabellestarteReview:
Good, but overwhelming.
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sabellestarte] • Date [8 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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JamesReview:
Honestly, I like this story, but sometimes slogging through the minutia of the histories can be a little mind numbing, being an American and all. If it weren't for Xander's superior brain enhancements at Avalon, I think he would crack.
James
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James] • Date [9 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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LordCorwinReview:
Nice update ... although, why Xander iddn't think of using the Avalon's computers before now.. is a small mystery ... but over all .. good chapter and I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
He's just a bit overwhelmed, and things are just starting to develop a routine
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LordCorwin] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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cjcoldReview:
Interesting chapter.
Glad for an update.
Should be interesting what Xander makes of the wizarding world.
The new stuff about Space research is a little out of left field. Could use some more background if you are going to use it.
Looking forward to seeing more of Avalon, the things they can learn from it should be useful for the space stuff at least.
I am guessing that Xander if trying to use Jarod and the superior computers of Avalon to run some strategic simulations on the various wars. Wonder what the result will be.
More soon please.
Comments from author:
The Space stuff will merely set a general 'tech level' for the background in this world. Unless I go completely insane and head in that direction (ponders this...then loses the thought).
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cjcold] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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BillReview:
Really lovin' this! Nice Big picture view.
Review By [
Bill] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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DragonelfReview:
::Gives the plot bunny a carrot omelette::
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Grown men may learn from very little children,
for the hearts of little children are pure, and,
therefore, the Great Spirit may show to them
many things which older people miss.
- Nicholas Black Elk [Hehaka Sapa]
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Dragonelf] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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erikthevikingReview:
Getting complicated keeping track of all the different people and factions.
Well written as ever.
Thanks
Comments from author:
Things and people will start to group together and make sense in the next few parts.
Review By [
eriktheviking] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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ElleriaReview:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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CPTSkipReview:
I am really enjoying your alternate history/BtVS story. When I reread your story, for the third or fourth time, I noticed in a previous episode that the Nazis took Spain in WWII. So I guess either the Republicans won in the 1930s and got invaded by the Nazis like France did or Franco won and allied with the Hun. Cool! And now it seems the French still have a King. Very interesting. I really like the way you are just sneaking out a few historical facts at a time. This is a very enjoyable story for us alternate history geeks. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thank you for noticing.
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CPTSkip] • Date [8 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "King Xander XXIII" from
BobbokyReview:
good to see more chapters from you,
Review By [
Bobboky] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "King Xander XXIII" from
dogbertcarrollReview:
Things should be heating up rather quick with all those people involved. I wonder what Avalon will say after it's scanned Jarod.
Review By [
dogbertcarroll] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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WolfWriterReview:
It's been an excellent story so far, but it's kind of hard keeping track of what's going on?
When are the Scoobies, Harry Potter and company going to come into the story?
I should think that Xander wouldn't be too happy about the fact that an entire society of magic users have kept themselves hidden from ordinary eyes for the better part of the past two hundred or so years.
Comments from author:
The Wizarding World will be starting to creep in on the fringes from part 26 onward, the Scoobs in part 25, and hopefully the 'prelude' that is the first twenty-three parts can progress in a more regular story mode *vbg*
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WolfWriter] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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ThewanderReview:
I am so Glad to see this story. its one of my favs. keep out the good work.
Review By [
Thewander] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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BluesnowmanReview:
Great stuff.
Review By [
Bluesnowman] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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HoytReview:
i love this so much!
007 plus vampires = 007
Review By [
Hoyt] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Not Rated