very nice fic

Chell'nak.

Thanks for writing =)

Great story. Hope to see more of the series soon. Thanks.

Loved all of these stories, and I understand that this universe can now live happily ever after, but I was hoping to read where Dawn fixes P3G-823 for them.

James

Having her fix P3G-823 never occurred to me. I have thought about having her go kick the Wraith's asses in Pegasus, and then the Ori's asses.

This was very enjoyable and an entirely plausible way for Dawn to access her "Keyness". I must say that my only criticism is that it ended way too soon! I would have liked to see far more exploration of the new Dawn and her powers.

The trouble is that Dawn is now *too* powerful. I could have her run off to the Pegasus galaxy and kick the Wrath's asses before lunch, and then take out the Ori in the afternoon, but that would get boring very quickly.

Having just 'found' Dsamples work I must say Dsamples immediately jumped onto my list of all time favorite FF writers.

What's great about 'Dsamples'? You don't take shortcuts but let the buildup take the time it should by letting characters stay true to themselves and never loosing sight of the importance of this while letting the plot develop.

As opposed to the 'let-the-chars-meet,-force-an-confrontation-with-their-enemies,-lets-be-buddies-and-immediately-share-all-our-secrets-in-the-first-chapter' x-over horribleness.

I enjoyed the probing dialogues between the scoobies versus the SG1 crew (and their intra side discussions). The buildup isn't (and should never be) an 'neccesary evil', it is (and should be) at least as enjoyable as when the 'chips' does start to fall.

Critique for the whole 'Misunderstandings' series:

- Minor (and debatable) note "Miss Harper worked for an organization called WCI."
The new Watchers Council are still into discretion I assume. Why have 'Rona Harper' openly listed as working for WCI ?
Invent dummy corporation(s) instead and don't make it so easy and obvious for anyone wanting to track WCI staff.

- Willows rabbit transformation might've been a little cavalier and nonchalant for post S7 Willow. A screwed up S6 Willow sure, post S7 Willow, maybe not.

- Loved the 'action' sequences in 'Misunderstandings' (Buffys longjump) (and the dialogue, the post S7 characterizations, the suspicions, the humor ...). These comments are pretty much true for all three installments.

- 'To be or not to be': GASP!!, you made Dawn have sex! Scarred for life here ...

"There were worse things out there." Like the Ori? Okay, a season nine sequel is definitely needed here. You have two paths: a) a total AU where the Key deals with the Ori problem quickly and decisively, or b) some reason why the Key's special abilities were neutralized during most of season nine. Either idea could spawn an excellent story, although seeing her overcome the challenges of the second would be quite interesting. (How would Dawn Unlimited cope with having limits again? Could she be partly responsible for the "Ripple Effect"?)

good way to end this story... though I do want more story

I love it :) Great writing.

I wish this wasn't the end of the story. Episodes would be nice? I would love to see what Dawn discovers about her power and what she decides to do about the Wraith. Very nice story. Thoroughly enjoyable!

A very good story! *two thumbs up* :)

I just wish you hadn't made The Key self aware in it because that's awful similar to a story I've been working on for YEARS, but haven't posted because it's not finished. I don't like to post while a story is in progress any more because my muse has a very bad habit of deserting me on a regular basis. *making a face* So I work on that story and others whenever I get inspired. When I finally do post my fic, I won't do it here I guess because too many people would think I'm copying you. LOL

great work, I really enjoyed reading it. *g* it's so very nice to see a mature Dawn once in a while.. it gets pretty boring to always have her whine.. *rolls eyes* and the character really has potential, in the right hands :) well done.

PLease write a sequel!!! Dawn against the Goa'ulds! It would so rock, I'm sure!

I'm afraid it would be very short.

Nice to see Dawn finally getting down to business. Like the idea of a Dawn-powered link to Atlantis, wonder how that would change things in both series.

It belatedly occurs to me that Dawn is now effectively immortal, assuming someone gets her back to the Stargate before she actually dies. Whether she wants to be is another matter, of course...

This has been an excellent story. I really hope you continue it in a sequel- this premise has a lot of promise.