Ooh, this is pretty interesting. Wonder what Tara will think of it all, and what will they think of her magic?

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You've definitely drawn me in. This has a very interesting beginning. I like the way you're taking your time getting into the story, although I can't wait to see Tara's reaction when she wakes up. I also like it that you've set this during the reign of Delores Umbridge, that should feed the tension and increase conflict.

I noticed that the pairing is Tara/?. Hmm, I have my own opinions about who makes a good pairing with Tara, but I'll keep them to myself unless you ask for comments from the peanut gallery. I'll be looking forward to that reveal as well.