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manicReview:
I absolutely loved this chapter. I actually had to reread chapter 21 as well. I loved the poker game, and Jack's "for crying out loud!". And Dawn's reaction to Jack's reaction.
Oh, and Dawn's "concern" about her being so much older than Jack was great! Finally, a kiss!
Thanks so much for the update!
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manic] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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RevDorothyLReview:
Way to go, Dawn!
And I really enjoyed the way you let Thor inadvertently play 'Cupid' by laying everybody's cards on the table (metaphorically speaking), so Jack and Dawn could finally be clued in about all the particular weirdness the other was dealing with.
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RevDorothyL] • Date [8 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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MBelaskoReview:
YAY!!!! An update, seriously I've been checking just about every week for an update. Love your work and now I can mull over the revealtions and think about how Dawn's gonna explain Jack to the Scoobies.
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MBelasko] • Date [7 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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MariaLucasReview:
I loved Dawn's take on the age thing and how she shut him up.
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MariaLucas] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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vinniebatmanReview:
I'm really enjoying this story and I like how it's going.
~Alice~
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vinniebatman] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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DragonelfReview:
::Feeds the plot bunny::
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Jack Napier: Have you ever danced with
the devil in the pale moonlight?
- Batman (1989)
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Dragonelf] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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dharkcharlotteReview:
**"Jack, shut up.” She grabbed his jacket, pulled him close, and kissed him.
Favorite part.
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dharkcharlotte] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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jadecatReview:
Fantastic chapter and story. The whole story has been captivating and in this chapter, I loved Dawn's argument..then she really did 'Anya' him. Thank you for sharing.
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jadecat] • Date [3 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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redrikkiReview:
Good chapter. You wrote an info-dump without making it too dump-y. I think having some comic relief from Andrew and The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy helped on that front. Nice job.
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redrikki] • Date [3 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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CJNyfaltReview:
Good chapter, especially the last part with Jack and Dawn.
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CJNyfalt] • Date [3 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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FrardowinReview:
Huh, I did not foresee this story getting updated again. Kudos for making me wrong.
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Frardowin] • Date [3 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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MarcusRowlandReview:
Nice logic there, Dawn!
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MarcusRowland] • Date [3 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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SulienReview:
*snorts with laughter* Oh, I do love Thor! Absolutely brilliant idea to have him be the one to bring the two sides of the story together. I'm really looking forward to seeing how you handle the whole Ori thing, especially when SG-1 v2.0 shows up inside Glastonbury Tor. Please, do keep going with this story! You probably won't be swayed by offers of the good chocolate (Fran's and Dilletante), but I'll make it anyway! *grin*
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Sulien] • Date [3 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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oldgirllostReview:
All right!!!
About time Dawn jumped his bones.
I really like this and glad you finally added another chapter.
Thanks
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oldgirllost] • Date [3 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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SpinelessPunsterReview:
Awesome characterization, as always.
Plot-wise, developing nicely, both globally and interpersonally.
I'm desperately wanting to see more, please.
Thank ya for a great chapter.
Review By [
SpinelessPunster] • Date [2 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
