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Review of chapter "Beneath Such Dreamy Weather" from Vampire
Review:
Hey, I really like the story and I was wondering if you were going to finish it anytime soon.
Comments from author:
Update? Yes.

Finished? No.

Sorry, but there’s a lot more that’s going to be added to this story which means it is nowhere near finished. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Review By [Vampire] • Date [4 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beneath Such Dreamy Weather" from spygrrl
Review:
Just caught up on this story and it is fabulous! It's such a small, dumb thing but I think I love you most for making Buffy a great cook. Somehow it's become fannon that Buffy not only can't cook, but is a horrible one in spite of evidence to the contrary in the actual series. So thank you for that. Like I said dumb, but it makes me very happy as a Buffy fan! :)

I also love, love, love the relationship between Faith and Buffy and is exactly how I pictured their relationship evolving post-"Chosen." It wasn't easy, but it was an absolute possibility for them to become the friends and sisters they always had the potential to be. You've matured their relationship wonderfully.

Also great job on capturing the dialogue and characters for both shows. I think you've written them all fabulously. I am totally loving the Cam-Buffy pairing and can't wait for more. :)
Review By [spygrrl] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beneath Such Dreamy Weather" from betrayal
Review:
Hey i found your story today, and i really liked it. I can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work.
Comments from author:
It's always nice to know when someone appreciates your hard work. Thank you.
Review By [betrayal] • Date [8 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beneath Such Dreamy Weather" from Amai
Review:
- He lifted the fedora, placed it smartly on his head and skimmed the brim with his fingers as he turned to make his way from the building. His stride was slow, his mouth dipping at the corners as he finished softly under his breath. “He’s not like them. He’s not going to mean to break your heart, but that doesn’t mean he won’t.” -

duh duh duhnnnnnn!

And other good things. Please update. :-|( {an attempt at a pouting smiley.}

Oh, also, Question; was the girl unprepared to see a sick person, or overwhelmed by his prettiness?

And one last note I almost forgot. Which would be bad, because the compliment is an integral part of a review. I love the descriptions used, (mostly because it's there, so often people tell stories with describing anything beyond frowns and sunsets and eye colour, *cough*mightbeme*cough*) but it's not overwhelming, but helps to give a better image of what's actually taking place by filling in blank spaces.
Comments from author:
I'm foreshadowing like the dickens in this particular fic. I don't want to sucker-punch readers with random angst like Joss. Not that I don't appreciate that type of story telling, I actually adore it, but this story really doesn't lend itself to those particular twists.

Ah Alice, she was definitely a smitten kitten. She was fine with the sickness, but flustered by the cuteness.

I tend to picture a scene in my head and go from there. It usually makes my stories a bit more detailed than some and I get both responses about it. Some adore it and some prefer I'd skip to the good stuff but I'm of the school that skipping to the good stuff cheats the reader. *shrugs* To each there own. Glad you enjoy it and thank you for taking the time to let me know.
Review By [Amai] • Date [1 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beneath Such Dreamy Weather" from Keshkreature
Review:
*cackle* I love it! The playful banter that they maintain is so in character for both of them, and such a delight to read! I'm glad she let Cam in on the secret, although Lorne's post-parting statement is quite ominous. And have you said why Buffy doesn't like ice cream yet? I'm not sure if I missed it, or you haven't gotten there yet. Thanks so much for writing!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I think Cam and Buffy would have that type of push and pull flirting banter and I'm glad you like reading it 'cause it's fun to write. I think Buffy's willing to share that side of her life with someone if she thinks they're in it for the long haul and Cam most definitely is, but when has either of them had an easy time when it comes to relationships? The ice cream moment hasn't been addressed yet and it won't come up again till we get closer to the end. A few people have been guessing but I'm not confirming anything. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beneath Such Dreamy Weather" from Lisa
Review:
I have no idea how I missed this! I love this story and man... fabulous chapter! I know I've said this before (and we've talked about it) but I love the interaction between Buffy & Faith. Love that they've finally found that common ground yet still are their characters. Faith kissing Buffy when she was leaving made me smile and was completely something our brunette slayer would do.

I truly adore this story, thanks for writing and for updating! xoxo
Comments from author:
I updated behind your back? ;)

You know I like Faith and Buffy on equal footing and moving past the mistakes that they both made towards one another. I personally don't think the story needs the drama that their relationship would bring if they weren't friends. The kiss just seemed very Faith-like and I'm glad you noticed it and thought so too.

Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [Lisa] • Date [28 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beneath Such Dreamy Weather" from Lisette
Review:
I think that in this case, I'm going to have to let my blush and grin speak for themselves.

Heh... FANTASTIC chapter. As usual, your descriptions were amazing... and about damn time that Buffy and Cam finally got some loving. :D
Comments from author:
LOL I'll take that as a compliment. I thought fluff and seduction were in order after Lorne's reveal and you're right, it was about time. ;)

Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [Lisette] • Date [11 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beneath Such Dreamy Weather" from RevDorothyL
Review:
What good physical therapy for Cam!
Comments from author:
Perhaps, though I wasn't entirely sure if he should be doing those kinds of activities yet. Hence why he ended up in a little pain. Glad you liked this latest installment and thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [10 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beneath Such Dreamy Weather" from manic
Review:
Thank you so much for the udpate. I adored the interaction with Faith.
Comments from author:
You're welcome. The Buffy/Faith moments are quickly growing on me as well.
Review By [manic] • Date [9 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beneath Such Dreamy Weather" from EchoElizabeth
Review:
I am really enjoying your story so far. It is well written, well thought out, and the characters are all believable. Kudos! I love the Buffy-Faith dynamic. You've captured them well, and I like the way they have matured and "domesticated." (Though your dialogue brought the image to mind of Faith, barefoot and pregnant in the kitchen - and that just made me giggle.)

Again, great job, and I look forward to reading more!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm a stickler for canon and detail so it's nice to have those things noticed and apperciated. The 'domesticated' conversation seemed to fit with the moment the pair was sharing. It was simple, clean and I think it (hopefully) showed how established their friendship is. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [EchoElizabeth] • Date [8 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beneath Such Dreamy Weather" from WittyNinja
Review:
Words cannot express how much I'm enjoying this story. You rock. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Speechless is good, makes me proud actually. Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [WittyNinja] • Date [8 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beneath Such Dreamy Weather" from Tempe
Review:
Great story. It's been a while since I've read this so I re-read the whole thing and I love where you've taken it. I like that you brought Faith into it and I'm interested to see if you're going to be bringing in anymore of the Scoobies. Plus I can't wait to see more crossover with the Stargate universe. Good work again and update soon.
Comments from author:
It's nice to know that the stories worth a reread. Thank you. As for the Scoobies, I'm leaning towards no. They tend to be detrimental to Buffy's relationships and to her at times. Buffy's core group in this story is Faith, Robin and Lorne. Those are her 'Scoobies' now.

The Stargate'verse will come more into effect when Cam is fully healed and can be reinstated. Until then you'll have to put up with just Buffy and Cam with cameos from Daniel and Jack. Hopefully that's not too much of a hardship. *grins*
Review By [Tempe] • Date [8 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beneath Such Dreamy Weather" from (2007%20Donor)Sulien
Review:
I love the way you write Faith and Buffy as friends. As for the Cam and Buffy part... *fans self* Yeah, I won't complain if there's more of that further on in the story! Thank you for updating this, it always feels like getting a present when you do. :-)
Comments from author:
A present? Really? *blushes* Thank you!

Those kind of Buffy/Cam moments are fun but they'll only be used when the plot will be strengthened by it and not just because I want to toss some hot moments in to stir things up - no, matter how tempting it is.
Review By [(2007%20Donor)Sulien] • Date [8 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beneath Such Dreamy Weather" from Thraceadams
Review:
Oh I'm thrilled as always that you updated this. And WOW what an update! The two of them are very hot together. Still worried he's going to break her heart though :) Great chapter! I really love the beginning bits with Faith...nice to see the two of them as friends!
Comments from author:
Is the heartbreak coming? Probably, but not for awhile and you'll know when things start to dip towards the bad. I foreshadow like the dickens. ;) The Buffy/Faith moments keep slipping in there and I just can't seem to stop the muse. Glad you liked this update and thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [Thraceadams] • Date [8 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Beneath Such Dreamy Weather" from Bunney
Review:
That was great!!! All of it was! I liked how you transitioned and your plot. Great googly moogly that was fun :)

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
Thank you. I like plot, plot is my friend.
Review By [Bunney] • Date [7 Jun 08] • Not Rated
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