Giles' description does not make sense to me. He had said just a few lines before the explanation of Voldemort's downfall that he hadn't been in contact with the wizarding world for 20 years. Sure, it's likely he would know about how James and Lily died and Harry lived, even without contact, but the whole thing where Voldemort flees to the Forest? Everyone thought him to be dead.

And no one in the wizarding world was to know exactly where Harry went. He knows way too much for a disconnected Wizard.

The idea for the story line is nice, but the writing is a bit rough. For example, the Hogwarts title is "Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry" but you use this a few times, "Hogwarts for Witchcraft and Wizardry"

I don't want to be mean. I just think the craftsmanship could be better.

I can't believe you killed her off just when she & Sirius were really getting together!
YOU FIEND!!! Bring her back!!!!!

HaHa...That was the general reaction I got from many reviewers. Bring her back, you say? You'll have to wait and see...

Thank you for the review!

Interesting ideas. Buffy was pretty true to canon, and you did some great snappy dialog. I was curious about her just blurting out Dawn's keyness. Is she just so numb that she doesn't really care what she is saying or is it Dumbledore's influence?

Quite a few grammar errors and typos. There is also a problem with flow from chapter to chapter, and some choppiness within chapters.

i loveeeeeeeee this story.
its wonderfulll :)

Thank you :) I'm glad you liked.

Omm my god. I need abox of cleanex. LOL. You can't end it there. She has to come back. Please think about adding more.PLlEASE!!!!!!!?????

Well...

I am adding another story. Not for a while yet, but there will be a continuation of this. Don't know if she's coming back though.

Thanks for the review!

Oh my goddess....*sniffling* *Hiccup* Broken hearted.......

I just finished reading chapter one and it really bugged me that Giles was calling them "mudbloods" The way i understand it Mudblood is an insult, i'm pretty sure Giles would use the term muggleborn instead.
Anyway, i'm going to finish reading, just wanted to point that out before i forgot about it.

Yeah, you're right. I wasn't thinking.

Oh I really really liked this...except for the last chapter. She supposed to come back to life again. She always does. It's tradition.

I really love this fic. I was wondering if you planned on continuing it or not. I hope to read more soon though. Great job!

i really hope you continue this...it's really good.
>^.^<
hangmansgirl

Oh how funny! He's a slayer groopie! Looking forward to the rest.

Oh great! Poor Buffy I guess she gets to be the new freaky teachers assistant. What a way to start the school year.

Wow that is a fast flying motorcycle! It is like the concord! LOL I am interested in seeing how Buffy and Serious get along. (I really imagined him much more Buff and good looking than in the movie)

i am totally a buffy/sirius shipper so naturally i love this story! please update soon! SlayerBunny! ^_^

I really like the way your going...keep it up...


write more please...