Posting makes for happy readers. No posting makes readers want to eat the writers. Would you please post soon!!!

Oh, please tell me there is going to be more of this!?! Please!! (If you are still looking for someone to take over, I wouldn't mind trying my hand at it...)

LadyS

oh man please write more soon, the cliffe is mean and my fingers are getting bloody from hanging on to the cliffe. please write more soon

I'm sorry. I just can't read anymore. The plot has potential... but it falls flat because you structured your story poorly and mismanaged the gender-bending... primarily in that you skipped over Xander getting familiar with his/her new state (something you just can't get away with in a situation like this) and, to make matters worse, didn't even explain what had happened until chapter 13.

To put it another way, these characters feel flat because you're focusing on events (and a Xander) which the readers haven't been coaxed to care about... partly because Xander feels out of character because you didn't walk the readers through the details of what turned familiar Xander into this Xander. That's especially inexcusable since a gender-swap is one of the biggest shocks a character can take... and that's for situations where it ISN'T painful. That just makes it worse.

Ideally, you'd also follow Xander from the beginning. You could probably get away with this structure if you showed how Xander got here using flashbacks (Dreams and/or nightmares would do if you don't want traditional flashbacks) right from the beginning (ideally, starting in chapter 2 with Xander's identity being revealed as a teaser at the end of chapter 1)... but as it is, your writing feels as if you think you're entitled to reader interest when you should be actively trying to hook the readers' interest.

I'd say "straws that broke the camel's back", but given how much gender-bending fiction I've read and how much I know about analyzing plots, I can fairly confidently say that this is more like logs than straws.

Evil Cliff Hanger!!!!!! NOOO! Please update soon.

So love reading this story can't wait to read more Thanks for continuing to write =)

please update soon

Ch.23 was bloody awesome! I hope they get to Wesley's fast and that Graham's plan doesn't work and that Xander stays unharmed. I cant wait for the next part to come out!! Keep 'em coming! You rock!


I hope you update soon!!! ^_^

Great chapter. Glad to see this continuing I am looking forward to more.

NOOOOO! Why'd you do that? Cliffies are evil. I wanna know what's going to happen. I think I'm gonna cry. lol. ^_^

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!

Another great chapter. More soon please. :)

Holy...I really want to read the next chapter. Soon.

wow Graham is too much like Angelus was speaking of hope he gets his ass kicked in the other story *hint hint*

OOOOO!!!! I love this chapter! The whole Miller stalker bit with Oz as her hero. And then Wesley and Xander getting closer. I hope Miller gets his ass handed to him.

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!