hihi:) I love your stories! Hope for much more of them :D:D:D:D:D:D

very well written I like it. Good read. Thumbs up.

Loved it!

Excellent story. I'm very happy with your Grissom/Greg, Xander/Brass & everyone else interactions. It's very cool that Greg's prepared to handle future cases in the same vein. Poor Xander, trying to do right by his mom and having that result.

Happy writing :)

I would love to see a follow up to this story......as well as either Riley or Xanders reaction to Gregs report.

*sniffle* Poor Xander. But nicely plotty, with the drama and angst instead of just humor. Nice change of pace. And his mother... *sigh* How realistic that was. But it's good to see Riley and Graham again.

Wonderful, I love poor Greg watching the tape and his interactions with the other CSI were well written. I also enjoyed the Riley Xander friendship you had going here. All in all very nice work.

Fantastic! I love the convo in the interview room between Xander and Brass - freakin' hilarious. I really think you nailed this one! Sometimes when I'm frustrated and can't find anything to read on TTH I come back and re-read this one. I would even love a sequel. I think that too many people write CSI crossovers revealing to many secrets. I loved the mystery in this one. Of course Xander is my favorite character which makes me love this anymore. Thanks for writing! - Joyclene

nice

Great fic! I loved this. But don't be mean to your sis, lol--reviews are to die for. Anyhow, you kept everyone in-character. And I'm glad you used Greg. Once again, great fic!

A fabulous fic. I loved the way you handled the characters- they were very real. I especially liked the interaction between Xander and Reily. Poor Xander though, his Mum running off and all :( Greg was great, first solo and all.

Thank you kindly

This was just so great. You have a knack for both Xander and Greg. I was really really hoping for a confrontation between just those two. A nonverbal meeting in the interrogation room in which Xander lets Greg know that he actually did reach the correct conclusion. Sorry, I spun off a little story in my head there. Anyway, very excellent. I laughed and almost cried (but don't tell anyone, okay?)

really good read. I wasnt so sure if I'd be all that interested at first since I usually read fics with pairings. But this was really good. And sad at the end with Xander's mom running off like that, but then again I didn't see them having a very good relationship anyways. But still sad for Xander to have his hopes broken in such a way. :(
Really good fic, thanks! :)

Very good story. I enjoyed the Xander interogation scene.

One flaw, though. Warren's body couldn't have been discovered, charred or otherwise, as it was completely destroyed. Vanished into nothing after the fire. I checked the BuffyWorld.com transcript for Villians, just to be sure. Your brother might wanna change that part.

Now, he better give you feedback.

Great story, very good Xander-Riley interaction/friendship.
I don't watch CSI,, but the story was still easy to follow.

And you should feedback your brother.