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TwobootsReview:
This is wonderfully well written, and yet terribly depressing at the same time. Thanks for this.
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Twoboots] • Date [17 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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SaturnReview:
How sad. And probably the way it would work it too. But you can't blame me for hoping that a fantastically femslashy conclusion could be had. :) Great little story.
Comments from author:
Thanks muchly. Crazy as it may sound, I was hoping for a fantastically femslashy conclusion myself, but it just didn't seem to fit. Thanks for reviewing.
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Saturn] • Date [31 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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gemmiReview:
So sad. I hardly ever read femslash, but I'm glad I gave this one a chance. I wish you had left a bit of hope at the end, but I can respect that you didn't. So sad.
Plus, I think Harry is just a bastard in your fic.
Comments from author:
Well, I'm glad you gave this one a chance, too. I appreciate you straying from your usual readings to give this fic a chance. Thank you.
As for Harry, it wasn't my intention to make him a bastard, but I can see what you mean. I'd like to think he would've been a little more... gentle with Faith if he'd known the outcome. Thanks again for reviewing.
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gemmi] • Date [24 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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NoclafReview:
ow. that burns.
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Noclaf] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Not Rated
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ChristyReview:
*sigh* nice to know that even fiction gets life better than we can sometimes. As Marcus said earlier, pairings don't always mean happy endings. Sometimes, even when you want them together, they don't always stay that way. Very human perspective on things- very well done.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review, sorry it took me so long to reply. I appreciate the comments. Most people want a happy ending, sometimes life gives crappy lemons with no hope of being lemonade. It's nice to know someone appreciates the not-so-happily-ever-after.
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Christy] • Date [16 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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fireflyReview:
Oh, this is so sad! And so unfortunately typical of what would happen to Faith. Good job.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing.
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firefly] • Date [2 May 07] • Not Rated
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angeluscadoReview:
That was so sad *cries* You're talented though; by the way you wrote it, I could see Hermione and Faith being like that. Good job.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
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angeluscado] • Date [30 Mar 06] • Not Rated
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zephyrRSReview:
Beutiful sadness. I do agree with the critique that the gryffindor in Mione would fight through it and past it. However, if I put that aside and stick to the story at hand it is perfect. Sad and heart-wrenching, but brilliant.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm glad you were able to look past my ooc screwup and still enjoy the story.
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zephyrRS] • Date [30 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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prettyragdollReview:
I loved this story, heartbreaking, but very good. You write this pairing really well, i hope you write more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I plan to write more (than the TtH100 response), it's just finding the time that's the problem. Thanks again.
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prettyragdoll] • Date [28 Mar 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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BrightlyReview:
Wow. Just wow. Maybe I'm a hopeless romantic, but unrequited love like that just tugs at my heart strings. Good show.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
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Brightly] • Date [27 Mar 06] • Not Rated
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BigHeadReview:
I know this is more or less a counterpoint to your other fic, but to be honest I liked the other more, for one single reason: Hermione isn't one to take the easy way out, and she would fight tooth and nails for what she truly wanted. I don't think she would accept Ron just to 'not be gay'.
That's it. But quite well written, aside from that.
Comments from author:
Thanks for being honest. I really appreciate that, and without constructive criticism, I'm not going to be able to fix what I do wrong. So, thanks. As far as Hermione, I definitely see your point. I guess it just got stuck in my head and I kinda had to get it out.
Thanks for reading.
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BigHead] • Date [27 Mar 06] • Rating [5 out of 10]
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MarcusRowlandReview:
Excellent. Glad to see that at least one author here realises that "pairing" doesn't always equal "happy ever after"
Comments from author:
Thanks. I just didn't see how this could end happily and still be... realistic, I guess.
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MarcusRowland] • Date [27 Mar 06] • Not Rated