Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from
cybersongReview:
Well I found this fic (or whatever people want to call it: poetry, redundant etc.) amusing.
I loved the last sentence: 'Her name is Faith and she's not a call girl... she's an ex-con.'
I could just picture CJ standing in the Briefing room saying it with a long-suffering sigh and deciding that she really WILL kill Sam this time!
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cybersong] • Date [24 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from
iroshiReview:
That's not a story, it's a poem. Don't get me wrong; I think it works...but it's a poem, not a story. :) That's why it doesn't "go anywhere". It's a thoughtform, a description; it doesn't *need* a plot. *grin*
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iroshi] • Date [1 Apr 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from
MountainWilliamReview:
LOL!!
I just posted my other review and you made it four of four!
Short and sweet, I liked it.
Review By [
MountainWilliam] • Date [1 Apr 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
