Fascinating ending... It really rings true to Xander's character, and I would love to see a sequel story or even a series of "oneshots" or drabble stories telling how they coped with Xan in Africa and Harry in England.

This was a great story thank you!

LadyS

Very nice. The pacing and story structure came together like clockwork. I realize that isn't something most authors focus on, so it may not sound important, but it's one of the big differences between a "good" and "just ok" story in my mind. I was very impressed with the way you handled it. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Good story :)

This was a very good story. Great work!!

That was truly beautiful.... :)

I loved this.

Art!
I hope you do a sequel. It was ~so~ good.
I was impressed how you restrained yourself from a lot of the angst most authors would have indulged in at certain points.
hot sex too.
I thought it was a great characterization of Xander.
Most cant not belittle him without giving him powers like hyena, soldier or sight or bashing other characters. This, I never lost my respect of him (or anyone else) or thought any less of him. He also never felt helpless.

Would love to see a sequel.

I've been trying to come up with a good storyline for a sequel, and so far I'm stumped. I do plan to write a one-shot for Sirius and Remus from their youth, as told at the dinner table. Thanks for reviewing and encouraging me!

Wonderful story. I really enjoyed it!

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

This was probably the best written, best laid out, most in character story i have had the pleasure to read on this site! seriously, you made me love it enough to join up so i could write this review! I love the Harry/Xander pairing and you did it justice!! wonderful. just wonderful.

You totally made my day! *hugs* Articulation was my first crossover fic, and it makes me ridiculously happy that readers enjoy it. Thanks for your review!

Love this.

Thanks! I've been hoping it's getting reread, or read for the first time with the COAs.

I was re-reading "Folded in your Heart" (somewhere other than tth), and realized I recognized your name. So I decided to come to tth and make sure I had read all of your stuff here. Imagine my delight at finding out there was lots I hadn't read. Yeah!

This was wonderful. From the beginning with Harry wondering if Draco had cheated on him, all the way to the end. My favorite was when Xander fooled Harry's gang and then used his winnings to drag Harry in to the world of comics.

Thank you! The fact that people enjoy my fics is still something of a nice surprise, so reading that you like them enough to check for more is wonderful!

This was my first crossover fic, and I had a lot of fun writing it. I got great feedback while it was a WIP, but fewer people review the completed fics. Thanks for taking the time to review and show me that it's still being read!

Love this

Thank you! I love seeing that it's being read!

Somehow I missed this story in the writing phase. It was wonderful to read in one fell swoop. I love your Xander - his quips and commentary are perfect!

Thanks! I'm glad you caught up with the story; I like the anticipation of reading a story in progress, but it can be great to just read a story straight through. I get a big kick out of writing Xander, so I appreciate your encouragement.

Awww... I love a happy ending.
Thanks for a wonderful story.

I'm a sucker for a happy ending! Someday I'll manage good angst, but not now :o) Thanks for reading and being so supportive as the story progressed.