Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
ziliReview:
The story was alright although I don't know if that would count as a good deed but then again Dru never did make sense
Comments from author:
err, well i guess i should have clarified that her "good deed" was letting Daniel know that jack liked him. i dunno, it was a bunny that nipped until i wrote it and by doing the 20 min thingy i did't have time to fully expand it. not that i'm planning on expanding it...
Thanks for the review.
Review By [
zili] • Date [29 Apr 06] • Rating [5 out of 10]