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LadyFoxFireReview:
So are you planning on updating this fic or is it dead?
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LadyFoxFire] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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AonGealachReview:
Please update this story soon. You know how much I love your writing and I hate it when you give up on a story.
Review By [
AonGealach] • Date [27 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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NanelovesslashReview:
bad, very baaaaaaaaaad PTB
okay, you didn't updated this story for a long time, and I guess, you won't, but let me tell you, I like that story
Xander as a dad is nearly as good as a Xander/van Diesel pairing, and the xovers? the Harry/Draco part was very funny and of course Ares, I love Ares (and Joxer)
I can't say anything about the gundam wing part, because I don't know the show (it's anime, right?) ah well, however, I love your writing style and hope to read a lot more from you
Nane
Review By [
Nanelovesslash] • Date [18 Feb 08] • Not Rated
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danyaelofazkabanReview:
OMFG, this is an incredible fic! I really look forward to seeing how you intertwine the gundam boys and xander and his children. Will it be time travel? Does Ares send his children to the gundam time for safety? Do Harry and Draco go with them? I can't wait to read more.
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danyaelofazkaban] • Date [9 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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escagirlukReview:
Cool fic. Love how Xander is all protective. Hope Ares kills the Powers.
Update soon, okay!
Review By [
escagirluk] • Date [3 May 07] • Not Rated
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LordCorwinReview:
WHAT! .. That's IT!Where's the rest of it
Comments from author:
My muse has left me . . . I think it died. -_- Or it went on a holiday. I'll try to get typing though.
Review By [
LordCorwin] • Date [28 Feb 07] • Not Rated
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SilverReview:
argh! update soonest please!!!! Geez, just as the story gets intriguing and on a new twist.... zap! no more chappies!
Review By [
Silver] • Date [31 Dec 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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ElleriaReview:
Update please!!!
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [22 Dec 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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zafaranReview:
Oh, this is a nice beginning. I like the way you have Xander developing. Loving, compassionate, willing to care for these children and make them his own. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters on this story sometime soon. Keep up the *very* good work. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
Review By [
zafaran] • Date [15 Dec 06] • Not Rated
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ElleriaReview:
More soon please!!!
Review By [
Elleria] • Date [4 Oct 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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KirallieReview:
Pissing Ares off, how dumb can you get! Poor Xander and Wing! Does Ares transport them to the GW world to save them? That's where it seems to be going anyway. Stupid, moronic, control freak, Powers!!! Hope he fries them to ashes!!!! Great story by the way!
Review By [
Kirallie] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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mrpageReview:
Great chapter! I can't wait for more.
Review By [
mrpage] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Smart people don’t make Daddy mad" from
KirallieReview:
Short but good. Just what are the idiot Powers up to? Can't wait to see!!!
Review By [
Kirallie] • Date [15 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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angelusluvReview:
I'm ready for the next chapter. i love it. when are the groups going to meet
Review By [
angelusluv] • Date [30 Jun 06] • Not Rated
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JewelReview:
I love the idea of this story, but a few things are driving me nuts. First is your persistent abuse of the innocent apostrophe. If you can't figure out the rules for the apostrophe (and they are pretty simple) - then don't use it at all.
Secondly, you sometimes slip into bad spelling, which I suspect is due to typing too fast. Slow down a bit and it'll probably sort itself out.
Review By [
Jewel] • Date [25 Jun 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]