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DreamSmithReview:
Interesting start!
Emma must be fairly jaded at this point, as regards the lusty thoughts she triggers in... well, I was going to say 'in men', but I'd imagine it's actually pretty much anyone with a working set of eyes. Even so, Wes is probably lucky he was so focused on his job-related worries, or else he would have either been brain-nuked, or had a petite little diamond foot planted in his goolies.
^_^
Looking forward to more.
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DreamSmith] • Date [7 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "parts 1 and 2" from
MBelaskoReview:
Awesome! I'm really interested in seeing what Wesley can bring to the mutant game, will have to wait and see how this develops.
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MBelasko] • Date [23 Sep 07] • Not Rated
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BobbokyReview:
sweet
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Bobboky] • Date [29 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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purrfusReview:
Never enough good Wesley centered crosses, so I'm delighted to see this one.
Comments from author:
While Wesley isn't one of my favorite characters, I find him interesting and useful enough to play with occasionally. Early Wesley is just perfect for a known Watcher that has no strong ties to Sunnydale, and if you move right, you can get him before he has strong ties in LA, thus freeing him for a crossover just about anywhere. The only 'downside' is that then, you have to cover Wesley maturing in the story instead of letting it happen during his transfer from BtVS to A:tS.
Of course, that also frees the author to shift Wesley a little differently than the Wes we got in A:tS and allows the creation of new emotional ties and connections...
I hope you continue to enjoy this story, and that it lets me update it faster this time.
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purrfus] • Date [28 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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cwolfReview:
Glad to see the new chapter. It's been so long, i forgot I reviewed. *grin*
Comments from author:
I wanted to update it sooner, but this story just wasn't talking to me at all.
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cwolf] • Date [28 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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mithrilandtjReview:
cool
curious to read more.
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mithrilandtj] • Date [28 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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amusewithaviewReview:
Oooh... we gonna see the Hellions? I LIKE this *nodnod* I really do, am looking forward to more - um, hopefully before next year?
Danke
Comments from author:
I'm glad that you're enjoying, and i really hope the story lets me update it faster this time.
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amusewithaview] • Date [28 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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JoeHundredaireReview:
And the plot thickens.
Me, I wouldn't survive the job interview. I'd think something about that 'glorious figure' that would have her melting my brain into a puddle of grey goo.
Comments from author:
Joe, are you sure it wouldn't be your thoughts about that 'glorious figure' that turned your brain into goo?
Besides, the woman's got to have an exhibitionist streak - why else would she dress the way she does? Of all people, she can't try to claim ignorance of the effect her clothing has on others. She probably figures that turning men's minds into hormonal goo makes it so much easier to get them to agree to anything she says, as long as they can stare at her cleavage....
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JoeHundredaire] • Date [28 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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belleimaniReview:
I would love to see more of this, Wesley's despair at being forced away from the Watcher's and the lack of respect from the others is well written.
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belleimani] • Date [5 Jan 07] • Not Rated
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AmarinRoseReview:
Wesley/Emma? Intriguing...
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AmarinRose] • Date [9 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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bannerReview:
Fascinating setup. I think I'll enjoy watching Green!Wesley turn into AdultCompetent!Wesley.
This looks very good.
Comments from author:
Competent adult characters are always more fun to play with than whiny, oblivious adults who are there as running gags and providers of food/housing/stuff for the teens. It makes them seem a little more like, well, like grown-ups.
I hope this one remains enjoyable for you.
Review By [
banner] • Date [30 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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manicReview:
What an interesting premise. Thanks for sharing
Comments from author:
Thank you. I like 'interesting', so that's what I aim for with my fics.
Lucinda
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manic] • Date [27 May 06] • Not Rated
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cwolfReview:
Considering all the pecularities of Gen. X... if that's the time frame you're putting him in.... he might think he was safer back in Sunnydale. *grin*
Comments from author:
chuckles....
But at least he's one person who'd have a bit of preparation for life suddenly getting interesting.
All I shall say is that Wesley is not intended for a quiet, boring life. What fun would that be to write about?
Review By [
cwolf] • Date [27 May 06] • Not Rated