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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from LadySybyl
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moremoremoremoremore... Please?!?

Oh, and that is a *HUGE* complement, as I almost *never* read het!fic, and absolutely never Dawn/Scooby(of any flavor) fic. So.... More, please?

LadyS
Review By [LadySybyl] • Date [3 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Dragonelf
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::Gives the plot bunny a carrot omelette::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from seri
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Loved this chapter, cant wait to see what happens when the two groups meet up.
Review By [seri] • Date [31 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from RevDorothyL
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Glad you haven't given up on this tale!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [22 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from darkmagician
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Yay, an update! It's about bloody time! When's the next one due? Soon, I hope.
Review By [darkmagician] • Date [21 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Elleria
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Very muchly looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [20 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from zafaran
Review:
I'm glad Remus was able to remember the conversation with Sirius so they've got a basis of fact to work with. More, more, more, please. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [20 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Kristal
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Horray, horrah! You updated! Oh, I love this story and it was exciting to see an update when I got home on Friday! Maybe by the next time I come back in two weeks, there will be another one! Hint, hint! Anyway, the story unfolds with the truth coming out. Continue ASAP! Write now!
Review By [Kristal] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Greywizard
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Well, I can see that things are going to go just as well when the Wizarding World people finally do meet the Scoobies as they normally do for everything else the Scoobies are involved in. ;-)

And Ginny's pregnancy isn't going to cause any problems, either, right? HA!!!

Good to see another chapter of this story.

Hope to see more soon.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from AllenPitt
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should make for an interesting meeting, to say the least. So Ginny is married to a muggle, in a sense. Poor "Harry" -- the kindest thing to do would be to run the spell again, and have everybody pretend it never happened, ie both people are happy with their lives as they are, surely?
Of course Xander is the 'real' Harry Potter, which does bring all sorts of inheritance / legal issues into play. A real mess, as Remus said. Heh.
And they still have no idea of what the IWC is. That should come as a real shock... Keep posting!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from SpinelessPunster
Review:
Excellent chapter, very glas to see progress on this one, I know it must be a tough one to write-lotsa characters and depth of dialogue.

Good luck, and more, please!!
Review By [SpinelessPunster] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from PheonixBlack
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In chapter 2 with the way you've said that harry(the one with ginny)was missing an eye. I don't think it would have worked like that Xander when he turned back into looking lke harry he should have still been missing his eye, not switch that as well. because no matter what xander's body not the illusion on him lost the eye.
Review By [PheonixBlack] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from mpop
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I'm interested to see where exactly you are going with this.
Review By [mpop] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from MarcusRowland
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OK, they're starting to figure it out - greatly looking forward to the Xander meets Harry scene!
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from zafaran
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More, more, more, please. Boy, Sirius's spell went even deeper than he thought. Did Sirius leave any sort of documentation by any remote chance that hasn't been found? I hope the mystery person who died in DH and is alive in BLS is Severus Snape, and that you're using him as a good guy. I actually think he'd get along with Xander if the appearing to look like Harry Potter doesn't set him off. He'd make a good tutor, too, since Xander is fully adult and behaves nothing like James or Harry Potter. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [4 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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