Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from
FritolaysReview:
Had to reread the story again. lol. I just love this story :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. Now my writing block seems over hopefully it will be posted soon?
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Fritolays] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
BuffyHalliwellReview:
This was interesting and catchy, you have a great writting style! I'm looking forward for an update :) but there's no need to rush :P worthy things take longer times.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I am trying to get myself motivated to add to my stories so hopefully you will get the final part of this one before the end of the year!
Blessings
Dave.
Review By [
BuffyHalliwell] • Date [20 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from
SpacedCadetReview:
Great (part of a) story !
Please do the rest.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
I am just now trying to get back into writing. Hopefully I will have something to post on some of my stories - Maybe not this one! - Soon.
Review By [
SpacedCadet] • Date [4 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from
MartinReview:
This is a beautiful story(it even made me cry a little), and also very true to the characters. Well mostly, I can more easily see a woman going bi than a man ever would, especially with these two wonderful women it would be easier to switch teams.
And instead of continuing this story, just tweak the ending a little and make a sequel if you want.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I do try to keep in character - unless there is a reason not to that is.
I am not sure what you mean by tweaking the ending, it has already been written - as has the beginning of chapter five, I just need to fill in the middle before posting it.
As for a sequel. Without bringing the Gilmores into Buffy's world more, I do not see it and it would detract from the reason why she does not want them involved.
Review By [
Martin] • Date [4 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from
FritolaysReview:
Ok, I just re-read this story again for the third time. Need an update!! lol. Any chance you will be updating soon?
Comments from author:
I do the same when a story I like has not been updated for some time.
At the moment I am finding it hard to get inspired to do any writing at the moment. Just watch this space for the last part.
Blessings
Dave.
Review By [
Fritolays] • Date [1 Feb 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from
gigiReview:
I love this story and all of your other ones. Please update soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I try to do some writing every day but sometimes (like now) I cannot that is why many of my stories do not get updated as often as I would like. Look to the skies. lol.
Blessings
Dave.
Review By [
gigi] • Date [12 Dec 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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zigpalReview:
great update. Of course, Buffy gets her personal life settled, and her calling goes and mucks it up, but there is an upside to a possible Travers pummeling. I can't wait to see how it ends.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Things do seem to happen like that don't they! But then Buffy did not state she would pummel Travers but that she would KILL anyone from the council - Will she follow through!!! DA DA.
Review By [
zigpal] • Date [10 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from
FritolaysReview:
YAYY. Been waiting for an update and you didn't disappoint! I can't wait to read the next chapter!! Please don't take too long getting the next chappy out. Keep up the great work :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. I will be trying (In more ways the one. lol.)to get it done but do not expect the next (and last) chapter much before early next year as it will involve among other things a trip to Sunnydale. Which means it will be the longest part of all.
Blessings
Dave.
Review By [
Fritolays] • Date [8 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from
GypsyDruidReview:
I am loving this. The interaction reminds me of the early seasons of Gilmore Girls, before it got all *serious*. Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. Me too. I have only seen upto the end of season five but yes it did seem to start becoming more serious by then.
Review By [
GypsyDruid] • Date [8 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from
NictaReview:
I like the story, but you need to remember the characters are American and not British, and therefor say "Mom", not "mum". It's not a big thing, but it takes away from the authenticity of the characters.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review and feedback below is a comment of a review from an earlier chapter on my use of UK spellings I use. Incidentally in the part of the UK I come from they pronounce it mom.
Blessings
Dave.
I assume by British slang you are referring to words such as ‘mum!’ Well the spelling has nothing to do with pronunciation; it is just spelt that way on this side of the pond. As I have said on other occasions if all words were spelt how they were pronounced there would be hundreds, if not thousands of different spellings. What I do try to do (And here my American beta is very helpful.) is use American words when an American is talking, such as gas instead of petrol, pants instead of trousers etc. (That does not mean I would not use petrol and trousers in the description of the same!).
Review By [
Nicta] • Date [8 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from
RavenMorbiskReview:
I'm glad you didn't abandon this. Hope the next update will be sooner =)
Comments from author:
Thanks. I just had various problems to overcome to get this part finished - computer as well as personal. Cannot promise that it will be sooner but it will be longer as it is planned to finish with part five.
Blessings
Dave.
Review By [
RavenMorbisk] • Date [8 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from
KnightWulfReview:
thanks for the update loved the chapter, getting more interesting with the council coming the stars hollow, can't wait for the next instalment.
Comments from author:
Thanks. The next chapter will be the end! Of the story (I may someday write a sequel).
Review By [
KnightWulf] • Date [8 Oct 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from
DevJannzReview:
I am glad to see this story updated. It is one of the most orginal pairings I can think of. I am looking forward to seeing where you take it.
Comments from author:
Thanks. This pairing just called out to me, had to see where it would take me!
Review By [
DevJannz] • Date [8 Oct 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from
CustomeHeroineReview:
I never would have thought of the coupling. But I'm glad you did. I never would have thought of Buffy as being that depressed, but it was a nice side of her. And you kept them in character well. It made a great story. I'd really like to know what happened afterward, though. It made me so happy that they finally got together! Update? Or add a sequel?
Comments from author:
Thanks, I do try to keep everyone in character. Part four is still being written. Hopefully it will not be to long in coming.
Blessings
Dave.
Review By [
CustomeHeroine] • Date [18 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from
RavenMorbiskReview:
I'd very much like to see an update on this.. I really like it..
Comments from author:
The update is coming, promise.
Review By [
RavenMorbisk] • Date [20 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]