Review of chapter "And you didn’t tell me WHY?" from
musicloverReview:
looks cool any possibility that i will be contiued
Review By [
musiclover] • Date [13 Apr 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And you didn’t tell me WHY?" from
SpiralMemoryReview:
Okay, more must be written:)
I have a 5 year old and we watch Ben Ten all the time. It's actually really cute show:) You've done a great job keep the characters in character and having Xander end up with the glove, lol, that was funny. Poor Xan, always ending up having to do the right thing. And now he's Papa Xander to 10 sproutlings. I can only imagine what they are going to be like and take on some of Xander's humorous quirks, like the love of Twinkies:) Keep it up!
Review By [
SpiralMemory] • Date [6 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finding" from
EzmereldaReview:
I am enjoying this story, even though I've never seen Ben Ten (not having cable...or satellite...sucks!). You did a good job of explaining it in your first chapter, so I'm still able to follow it. Any story in which Xander gets to be the hero is a good one in my book.
Thanks for writing! ~"~
Review By [
Ezmerelda] • Date [25 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finding" from
TorturedAngelReview:
Whooooohooooooooooo awesome! :)
Review By [
TorturedAngel] • Date [25 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Finding" from
TjinReview:
not bad, you have deffinite skill and the story is interesting.
Review By [
Tjin] • Date [25 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "If the glove fits" from
TorturedAngelReview:
very good! :)
Review By [
TorturedAngel] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "If the glove fits" from
redwulfyReview:
this is great! definitely interested in where you take this. love the Xander!alienicecat.
Review By [
redwulfy] • Date [23 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Crash" from
TorturedAngelReview:
neat!! :)
Review By [
TorturedAngel] • Date [22 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Crash" from
SusanAnthonyReview:
Very interesting beginning! I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this. Xander, as usual, getting into a completely odd situation and taking on the responsibility of someone else. Please post more soon.
Review By [
SusanAnthony] • Date [22 Jun 06] • Not Rated
