Review of chapter "Harry" from
kribbyReview:
I don't know why you centered the story-- It makes it difficult to read. Actually, this format convinces the reader to stop reading! Surely you have noticed how no other writers on this site center their stories.
edit...
hm.. weird. if you choose the 'whole story' function then the whole story is centered. Don't know what that means...
Comments from author:
I'm sorry...but on my computer, it desn't seem like any of the chapters are centered. The only one that is centered is the first chapter, ["Notes and Things"] and that's not even a real chapter. Although, if you did not get past that first chapter, I can see why you would think that. But if all the chapters are still centered for you, then it's just a formatting error.
-evilelvengoddess
My edit:
Oh...I did not know that.
Well, I found the issue. I didn't close the center on the first chapter, so when you do whole story, everything is centered. It should be fixed now, and only the "Notes and Things" part should be centered.
Review By [
kribby] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Harry" from
GoddessaReview:
Well, this is kinda creepy and the chappies are pretty short, but I like it. I always liked the lamenting ones, and I am a Buffy/Angel person, or at least a Buffy centric. When it comes to HP I am Harry-centric though there are a few acceptable pairings, including Harry/Ron/Hermione. CONTINUE!
Review By [
Goddessa] • Date [22 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Notes and Things" from
AngelusloverReview:
Faith 23?? I don't think that she was 14 in season 3
Review By [
Angeluslover] • Date [22 Jun 06] • Not Rated
