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TanydwrReview:
Nice.
If you're trying the British swear-word though, it's bollocks. Not bullocks. Bullocks are male cattle, for heaven's sake. People keep writing bullocks instead of bollocks and it's pissing me off. Sorry you got the rant.
Anyone else get the feeling Spike was trying to set the guys up? Hmm, wait until Dean meets Buffy and Faith...
Lol, Tanydwr
Comments from author:
Hey I fixed it! And you ppl across the pond get it wrong with american curses in ur writing too... I swear if I hear Dean call Sam (or other non-britt characters) a "smart arse" one more time I'll go crazy! lol. Thanks for the review and the correction.
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Tanydwr] • Date [30 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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EllieReview:
Man I love Illyria.LOL
-Ellie
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Ellie] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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heathenseyesReview:
LOL
That was hilarious, I don't suppose your going to continue it?
Please?!?!?!?
:D
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heathenseyes] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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WisprReview:
Now that was just brilliant... don't really know Supernatural at all, but your writing made made up for that by describing the characters so well. Good work!
Wispr
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Wispr] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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linkReview:
'Tastes like chicken'. LOL. I love this fic. Lots of funny moments. Now, my head is full of the image of Spike the Flying Vampire. It will be more fun if you do the sequel about the Winchesters in Cleveland *wink*
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link] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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cflatReview:
Funny! Good chapter. And nice encounter. Angel and Spike had better hope they don't run into Gordon, though.
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cflat] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Not Rated
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DemonChildeKyraReview:
So, you "re-vamped" it, huh? *snickers* How punny! LMAO Anyway, still loving it! Still gettting the yummy shower visuals though! Not that I'm complaining or anything....Please say you're doing a sequel with the boys in Cleveland!!!! Please, please, please!!!
~ Kyra
*mutters to self* "Re-Vamped" *snickers again*
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DemonChildeKyra] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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PrincessTaiReview:
>>>Angel was annoyed by this comment. He didn’t brood, or sulk! He just… Thought a lot about sad things that he’s done in his past and…well it wasn’t brooding, damn it! He was repenting for his sins and he should be allowed to have a private moment a time or two without someone getting on his back!
SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ANGEL!
Oh. I love the guy. I dunno I have been in an Angel fic kick lately and he's been growing on me alot. This fic had Angel tendencies before but they're strong and I like the little ways you showed that. I didn't say it before but I liked that inner monologue bit, when he was thinking of his meeting with John *snickers* I love the interaction between him and Spike. Perfect. Down pat.
And Illyria. I don't know if I should laugh or if I should cry for Dean
*giggles* Golden Boy, hmm? *raises brow* Let's not stroke that major ego :-D
I still can't get over that bit lol
First step to being cured Angie is admitting you have a problem.
I'd so love to say that to him.
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PrincessTai] • Date [28 Nov 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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PrincessTaiReview:
lol :-D
That was nice.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I actually re-vamped it. Lemmie know what you think! :0)
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PrincessTai] • Date [29 Aug 07] • Not Rated
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EffieReview:
I love this one. It earns a good place in my Hart- I meant heart, yes heart. I love the part where Sam says it taste like chicken and then them giving him freaked out looks. That was brilliant.
Effie
Comments from author:
thanks! i loved that line too. I just went over it and decided to add more stuff and detail... lemmie know what you think! :0)
Review By [
Effie] • Date [15 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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magicgerbilReview:
Cute!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
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magicgerbil] • Date [1 May 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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EllieReview:
Oohh, I liked that. Snappy, funny and fast paced. Not to mention Illyria showing the good taste to ogle the goodies while Dean was getting dressed. We should all be so fortuante with our entrances, but alas it is not to be. Oh well.
The banter between Spike and Angel was spot on. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
-Ellie
Comments from author:
Thanks! I actually did just re-vamp this story so if you'd like you could tell me if i did a good job? ;0)
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Ellie] • Date [14 Feb 07] • Not Rated
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DemonChildeKyraReview:
That was really good! I love Illyria, she's so funny! Poor Sam, Dean, Angel and Spike; getting demon goo all over them. Though that leads to yummy visions of the four of them taking showers to get all that goo off. *drools* Anyway, I loved it! Awesome work!!!!
Comments from author:
stop implanting yummy pictures in my head! hehe i just re-vamped this story. check it out again! i added some more funny! ;0)
Review By [
DemonChildeKyra] • Date [16 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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MegalomaniactwoReview:
That was a lot of fun, with good humour and characterizations all around. Good job!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
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Megalomaniactwo] • Date [7 Oct 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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jossisbossReview:
Totally got the characters and i loved the part where Sam thought the goo tasted like chicken. Hope there's going to be a sequel...
Comments from author:
I'm thinking and thinking of a sequel... to get me in the mood I read this story (and revamped it)!
Review By [
jossisboss] • Date [2 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]