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betrayalReview:
Am so glad that you've had the opportunity to update. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work.
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betrayal] • Date [20 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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XeeliaReview:
Wonderful story! I noticed that you put "End Part 1" does this mean there will be a part two? I hope so, you are a talented writer.
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Xeelia] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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TrueRedRoseReview:
Very Nice. I like the way you wrapped up this chapter with Micah's family and Dawn's pending adoption. End of part one... thirteen years? Looking forward to Part 2.
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TrueRedRose] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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skychanReview:
This is a very nice chapter, and again congradulations on doing such a delicate job with Dawn. I really enjoy the charachterization you've managed for her.
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skychan] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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julzReview:
I love your story and wish that you would update more! If you're not feeling inspired by this age any more i would enjoy reading any age you'd like to write, like if for example you decided to skip foreward 5 or 10 or13 years, i want to read anything about these characters that you should care to write
thanks for updating
you rock
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julz] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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KeshkreatureReview:
*gasp* "End part one?" What's the next one called? And what if I can't find it when it comes out? *panics*
*takes a deep breath* On a different note, hooray for Dawn getting adopted! The whole scene with Micha's family was really well done. Will we ever see Buffy again, or did all that blood loss actually kill her? And has time just passed a lot faster for Dawn than Buffy? I'm really looking forward to the next story!
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Keshkreature] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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NoclafReview:
cool, cool! It seems like you want to move past the "cute ickle Dawnie" stage in to some plot, and that's cool. I'm looking forward to where you take this.
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Noclaf] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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ecbookwormReview:
Woot! An update! And Micah's family really sucks. So... thirteen years later? Is Dawn going to have doctorates by then?
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ecbookworm] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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OrionReview:
I think this may have been the first fic of yours I read. I've come to love Physics of the Spin since then, but this is still a good story. With the last line here, I wonder will the next chapter be a significant flash forward? I look forward to finding out.
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Orion] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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DarksidheReview:
Wow! Just Wow! I re-read this series just a few days ago and I wished with all of my heart that it would be updated. See Virginia, there is a Santa Claus!
Great chapter, I'm so glad that you introduced Micah's family. The interaction between characters is so great. I look forward to reading more.
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Darksidhe] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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uniquewithoutuReview:
thanks for the update, please post another soon! :)
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uniquewithoutu] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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MarbleGloveReview:
Wow. (I breath a deep and contented sigh.) This was a fabulous story. I hope you decide to write a part 2 at some point, but this is quite wonderful all on its own.
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MarbleGlove] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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NightscreamReview:
Nice Job! Its been awhile since your last update but this was worth waiting for. I can't wait to start reading the next part so I hope you post it soon!
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Nightscream] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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musicgirlReview:
Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful.
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musicgirl] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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RachelKReview:
Glad to see more of this story. It makes we want to go back and read the previous chapters. Are you going to jump to Dawn being 17? There seems to be so much more that could happen with an child with an advancing education level and interactions at the university. Thanks for sharing.
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RachelK] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Not Rated
