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clynnReview:
Awesome story, keep them coming!
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clynn] • Date [29 Apr 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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SuzanneReview:
Ohhhh please update. I would love to see what happens next:)
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Suzanne] • Date [13 Apr 08] • Not Rated
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BunneyReview:
Keep it coming!
Later and Love
Bunney
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Bunney] • Date [18 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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amusewithaviewReview:
Uh, where's Oz? I find it almost impossible to believe that she would leave all her friends AND Oz behind. You haven't really explained any of that yet. Other than that this is fun, but yeah, an explanation would be nice
Danke
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amusewithaview] • Date [17 Jul 07] • Not Rated
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BunneyReview:
just bumping you to add another part!
Later and love
Bunney
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Bunney] • Date [2 Jul 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from
BunneyReview:
SO your plot is devolping REALLY slow. It is showing your lack of ideas. The story is actually very good, but it needs direction in a serious way. It feels like your dragging your feet, if you still need help i'm a good chatter to help with ideas, but i suck at grammer and junk. And yet with all that i am curious on who the teacher is? :)
Later and Love
Bunney
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Bunney] • Date [29 Jun 07] • Not Rated
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azulkanReview:
Enjoying this story. Looking forward to the next part.
Review By [
azulkan] • Date [27 Jun 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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arkeusReview:
LOL
LOVED your comparison of snyder and snape. So true :-)
happy dance.
Comments from author:
Since they both had similarly intimidating authority figures, I thought it'd be a shame not to use it as a way for them to bond. Glad you liked it :0)
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arkeus] • Date [26 Jun 07] • Not Rated
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DancyerMcCoyReview:
Very nice. I'm enjoying the story and look forward to seeing the next chapter. I wanna know who the DADA professor is.
Comments from author:
Thanks. The professor won't stay a mystery for long. Stay tuned.
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DancyerMcCoy] • Date [26 Jun 07] • Not Rated
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mithrilandtjReview:
RAT! cutting it off like that! Who's the DADA teacher?
Comments from author:
Calm down there; you'll find out soon enough. What would fanfic be without cliffhangers?
Review By [
mithrilandtj] • Date [26 Jun 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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ArjaiReview:
I think that Willow will probably do wonders at helping with Neville's concentration problem, and maybe teach him a little about how to babble others into confusion, much to Snape's dismay and utter discombobulation. The tale is progressing nicely, keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I figured they could both benefit from some friendly bonding.
Review By [
Arjai] • Date [26 Jun 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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littleoldmeReview:
As someone who's lived on both sides of the pond, I think you're doing brilliantly with the American/British differences in language! I like all of your characterizations, and am enjoying the plot.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I have also lived on both sides of the pond, and I think it helps when I go to write the characters.
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littleoldme] • Date [26 Jun 07] • Not Rated
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KyliaReview:
I might be interested in betaing. you can add me to your messenger at either divyadivine@hotmail.com or kylia_skydancer (yahoo)
I have exams till the 15th of june but after that, I'm all yours (just tell me who you are when you add me K?)
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Kylia] • Date [8 Jun 07] • Not Rated
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ArjaiReview:
Nice beginning, well thought out follow through. It has the makings of a solid 10, as you continue on. Good show!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [
Arjai] • Date [18 May 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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arkeusReview:
good work!
while my english isn't good enough to be a beta, i ll be willing t trade ideas or more like concepts on the story, but be warned...i have some strange views, sometimes.
Comments from author:
I always welcome feedback. E-mail me through the link in my profile, and send me your e-mail address.
Review By [
arkeus] • Date [18 May 07] • Not Rated
