Review of chapter "Epilogue" from
ObsidianReview:
Very Good story. Nicely Written, Thanks.
Review By [
Obsidian] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from
DragonelfReview:
I most definitely hope you will get inspired to write a sequel to this brilliantly imaginative tale you have spun. (It isn't easy to imitate Hank "Beast" McCoy's speech pattern)
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot soup while humming the Addams' Family theme song::
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Don't kick the monster!
Program a robot to smash it,
Shoot it, Spear it or even
Throw something at it (preferably
a grenade), but NEVER kick the monster!
NOTE: does not apply to BLACK BELTS.
- Unknown
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Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [14 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from
LurkerOOlReview:
Outstanding!! Very nice to see the war from a different standpoint. I was glad to see Ginny have such a crucial role, she's one of my favorite characters. I hope someday Charles Xavier chews Kalli's Uncle a new rear end. Again, excellent story.
Review By [
LurkerOOl] • Date [14 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Seven" from
AllenPittReview:
Yay... You should consider a sequel in which Kalli gets involved with the X-Men & the Hogwarts crew helps them against Magneto or some such. Or maybe there's mutant/wizarding world friction that's getting worse. Perhaps V. was in preliminary negotiations with the Brotherhood?
It also seems like Kalli doesn't know very much about what her parents did...and it's kind of weird nobody from the X-Men seems to have checked in on her; one would think Wolverine would if nobody else...
Comments from author:
The X Men were kept from her as much as possible, because Jean and Scott didn't want her involved in that life. And the epilogue is up now, I hope you enjoy it. I might one day do a sequel but I'm very busy with uni atm lol.
Review By [
AllenPitt] • Date [12 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Seven" from
DragonelfReview:
The galaxy in a marble phrase reminded me for some reason about Men in Black.
::Gives the plot bunny a carrot omelette::
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Grown men may learn from very little children,
for the hearts of little children are pure, and,
therefore, the Great Spirit may show to them
many things which older people miss.
- Nicholas Black Elk [Hehaka Sapa]
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Comments from author:
Thank you! That's exactly it. You are awesome. The last and final chapter is up now *sob*
Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Six" from
DragonelfReview:
::Gives the plot bunny a carrot omelette::
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"Challenge is a dragon with a gift in its mouth...
Tame the dragon and the gift is yours."
- Noela Evans
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Comments from author:
*plotbunny nibbles*
The new chapter's up now, hope you enjoy it.
Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [6 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Six" from
LiastraLeeReview:
Wow. I love this story. Took all night to read, but it was way worth it. Post more soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. I'm glad you find it enthralling. The new chapter's up now, hope you enjoy it.
Review By [
LiastraLee] • Date [6 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Five" from
ecbookwormReview:
"cursing first Luna's house-elf" I think you probably mean the house-elf Luna was dueling, but that sounds more like Luna brought a house-elf with her and Neville was reaming it out because the elf couldn't prevent Luna from getting hurt or something. And considering what Narcissa probably thinks of Mudbloods, the fact that she's impressed by Kalli's power is more of an insult than anything. And "the Room" is very vague, hopefully this is only because Letty is on the verge of unconsciousness, because otherwise Harry and Co. are going to be very frustrated indeed. Update soon please!
Comments from author:
Yeah I did. And "the Room" is purposefully vague, due, as you guessed, to Letty's lack of consciousness.
The new chapter is up now, I hope you enjoy it!
Review By [
ecbookworm] • Date [29 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Five" from
DragonelfReview:
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Yay, new chapter.
Comments from author:
The new chapter is up now, I hope you enjoy it!
Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [24 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Four" from
ecbookwormReview:
Ouch, Narcissa seems to be in a right temper. I hope that Crucio isn't aimed at Letty, I think she's still weak enough that she'll probably collapse. How well is Draco going to react to fighting his mother, anyway? He going to kill her, or just knock her out? Waiting anxiously for the next chapter so update soon!
Comments from author:
Here's the next chapter, exams got in the way. I hope you like it, you'll get the answers to your questions ^^.
Review By [
ecbookworm] • Date [14 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Four" from
awandererReview:
Very enjoyable. I like the conflict between Draco and Lucretia.
Just caught up to the current chapter. Draco was well done.
NTP
Comments from author:
I'm so glad you like him, he's one of the hardest to write. New chapter's up now enjoy.
Review By [
awanderer] • Date [6 Jun 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Four" from
DragonelfReview:
I see you left us with one of those famous cliffhangers.
I hope we will see more chapters soon.
::Feeds the plot bunny::
Comments from author:
I likes the cliffhangers. They make people read ^^. But I'm sorry I left it so long. Exams, you know. The new chapter's up now!
Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [5 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Three" from
ecbookwormReview:
Hurrah another review! I'm back after another exhausting year of school (what on earth was I thinking taking so many APs?) and actually had re-read your story. Totally worth it though. I wonder if the battle may force Kalli to use her mutant powers or if Harry may be forced to reveal hole card (the suit) early? Hope they rescue Letty in time, at the very least it sounds like tons of Blood-replenishing potions to go, and update soon!
Comments from author:
Well here you have it, the next chapter. Sorry to leave you on a cliffie :-(. I know what you mean about exhausting schoolwork, I'm in the middle of exams at the moment T-T.
Review By [
ecbookworm] • Date [3 Jun 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty Two" from
chaddersonReview:
It's nice to get away from reading fics involving Buffy and the Gang, and THIS is the perfect fic for it! You have the makings of a series here. Excellent prophecy, great way to work in additional and new characters and I totally look forward to seeing how it all works out! Hope you continue this story and give us all a really nice Christmas present :). I'll be checking often!
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the wonderful review, I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. The new one is up now, if you want to check it out.
Review By [
chadderson] • Date [7 Dec 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty One" from
AllyssiandraReview:
I absolutely love that 'whole story' feature here on TTH. I just found your story and was able to take it with me easily on my pda. I ended up staying up late reading it. I'm really looking forward to reading more, soon I hope.
Good story.
Comments from author:
I'm so glad you like it, your comment inspired me to write another chapter as quickly as I could to feed your craving, lol. Thank you for reviewing.
Review By [
Allyssiandra] • Date [30 Sep 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]