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Review of chapter "Part Three" from BlueBoo
Review:
Hilarious. What were you smokin'?

That is seriously twisted. Poor JD. sigh.
Review By [BlueBoo] • Date [5 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Three" from murdock
Review:
faith is just the type of girl jd needs and its still funny.
Review By [murdock] • Date [2 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Three" from penguinsinlove
Review:
Love this cute little story. And, yes, Faith would be able to make Perry's life hell. hehe. Xander and Elliot are kinda perfect for each other! Never realized.
Comments from author:
The more I think about it, the more I have to agree that Xander and Elliot work as a couple.

May have to revisit them some time in the future...
Review By [penguinsinlove] • Date [24 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Three" from (2007%20Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Neat. Good background chaos :)
Comments from author:
I do love a little chaos...
Review By [(2007%20Donor)Shieldage] • Date [24 May 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Three" from LMiC
Review:
Very funny. Could have used a little editing for word correction (definitely vs. defiantly) but otherwise, terrific.
Comments from author:
I have a blind spot for those two words.
Review By [LMiC] • Date [24 May 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Three" from raisins
Review:
You know he's into it, JD would kill a man to be related to Dr. Cox.
Comments from author:
And Dr. Cox would then kill JD.
Review By [raisins] • Date [24 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Three" from Elleria
Review:
Oh man, I can just picture Perry's reaction to that! Love this.
Comments from author:
He'd either kill JD of have a stroke.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [24 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Three" from (2007%20Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL!

Very cute. Loved the ending!

They are a very compatible pair.
Review By [(2007%20Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [23 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Three" from missinglink
Review:
Glad to see you added another chapter. Possible futher chapters that might be fun would be a Buffy/Cox confrontation of egos, Gunn and Turk have a discourse on what it means to be a brother among white people, fallout of Faith doing something with JD that will drive Perry nuts, the janitor earning the wrath of Willow (could also be amused study of him as he is a benign demon), Carla getting after Turk for stareing at the slayers, or Bob trying to hire Spike to take out Enid. Hope this fuels it as you have a good way with the characters and it is a fun premise to play on. Keep it up. Later
Review By [missinglink] • Date [23 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Three" from rothos
Review:
Funny and a few mistakes, and by few I mean two. Xander got on a plane from Cairo to LA because the Watcher's Council learned about the reprocussions; not reproduction of what Angel was going to do. And in part Deux its holding not hold.
All in all a good story; could be reread for punctuation but I have no complaints. Let me be the first to say that its better than what I do most of the time.
Review By [rothos] • Date [23 May 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The hand that breaks the fall (Part Deux)" from Blackguard
Review:
all i can say is, go xander go xander go xander
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [19 Nov 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The hand that breaks the fall (Part Deux)" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The hand that breaks the fall (Part Deux)" from (2007%20Donor)CallmemasterKent
Review:
I loved it...I just wish it was longer...which is bratty of me to say since more than 50% of my stuff is getting done one chapter for every four months that goes by...despite that I would love to possibly write an Elliot/ Xander answer to the when I woke up challenge...would that be stepping on your toes though?
cheers
MJ
Comments from author:
If you want to write a Xander/Elliot "when I woke up" fic, I would be the last person to stand in your way.
A) I think they work great as a couple.
B) I’ve always said that if anyone wants to take one of my ideas and run with it, I’m more than happy.
C) As I don’t own the rights to either show, I couldn’t stop you even if I wanted.

So have fun, write your fic: I’ll even read and review it :)
Review By [(2007%20Donor)CallmemasterKent] • Date [8 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The hand that breaks the fall (Part Deux)" from Mel
Review:
I was disappointed with the ending of chap 1 but I still liked it, now with the 2nd chap I love it, perfect ending. Though I would read more if the bug grabbed ya again.
Review By [Mel] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The hand that breaks the fall (Part Deux)" from Elleria
Review:
Amusing
Review By [Elleria] • Date [7 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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